That looks on point generally speaking. For yeast, I've used US05 and US04 and they've all worked. As for grain bill, I think you could probably just go all 2-Row, 1# flaked wheat, and I usually add 8 ounces of carapils/dextrine (for head retention), and between 12 oz - 1# of C-10, or C-15 if you can find it, to add a bit of the electric orange color. For instance Trillium uses 2-row, white wheat, C-15, and dextrine for their Fort Point Pale Ale. I've had great success (to me) with the following:
80% 2-row
11% white wheat malt
6% (ish) carapils/dextrine
3% (ish) C-15
Those are great hop choices! Galaxy is my favorite. You might not need all three of them, as I have found my taste is for pairing something bright and tropical like galaxy or mosaic with something like centennial or Simcoe to balance bright with something a little earthy. Galaxy, Amarillo, and Citra might get a little duplicative, but then again, maybe not!
As for hop schedule, I was just reading Brad Smith in the latest Brew Your Own talking about maximizing hopping additions and my curiosity is piqued. He recommends no late-boil or flameout additions, since close to 2/3rds of the hop oils from a hop like Amarillo or Citra (myrcene hop oil) will boil out in a 10 minute addition. Myrcene will boil at 160, so even a flameout addition might be too inefficient. I've done it where I add a bittering addition at the beginning of just enough to get to my target IBU (for a NEIPA around 40 IBUs, maybe?). I've used a hop extract mainly for that (to keep from too much kettle and overall trub loss since you're going to be adding a lot of hops!) Then the next addition is a hopstand/whirlpool addition. Then two dry hops, one around 3 days in, for that biotransformation effect, and then another a week later.
But one thing I've been wondering about with that BYO article is do you even need the whirlpool addition? Could you go with just the bittering addition and the dry hops? This isn't specific to your recipe, but just an idea that's banging around my head right now.