I just returned from a Portland beer trip last weekend. Your map looks good, I hit most of those spots and was very happy with them.
How long are you in town for because that seems like an awful lot to try to hit if you're just there for a weekend (and going to Degarde on a Saturday). Over a long Fri-Sun weekend I was able to do HoD, Upright, APEX, the Commons, Beer Mongers, Cascade, & Deschutes and that was a jam packed weekend.
Also make sure you check the hours at a lot of these places.
For example HoD is closed on Mondays.
Upright is usually only open in the evenings on Thurs/Friday 5-9pm then only open in the afternoon on Sat/Sun.
The Commons is only open Thurs-Sun with similar hours to Upright