Hi BM,
After coming across and loving Kona Fire Rock Pale Ale while visiting CA and then finding your recipe, I've brewed a slight variation three times since July 2012.
The modifications were Rahr Pale Ale Malt rather than MO, using good German Munich II (Best or Weyermann) and adding a touch of CaraRed Malt to go along with the Honey malt to darken the beer up a bit. I also used the Kolsch II yeast that was out at the time from Wyeast rather than the regular Kolsch and fermented at 62F. I must say the honey malt is what gives this a sweeter taste.
I was pretty surprised when my APA entry took 1st Place in the 2012 Schooner comp (Racine Wisconsin) out of 26 APAs. It has since become my house Pale Ale.
Now I just got in a fresh load of hops and plan on making a few APA batches to test out some other hop combos using the same base AG malt/yeast recipe and early hop additions but try some other late combos like Amarillo and Mosaic or Citra.
Thanks for sharing your recipe.