First Label

[Greenspey]

I just made my first label and then noticed that there's a section for label making here. I'm going to read for more ideas, but here's my first one.

 

[slnies]

I like the label. My only critique is to make the lettering brighter or to make them stand out more. They kind of blend into the background at a quick glance. They should pop, and say "It's me! I'm here! I am Beer!!" LOL Otherwise I like it a lot. S.

 

[Greenspey]

Thanks. AFter looking around I realized that I've left quite a bit of information off the label. There's a ton of great examples on this site. Thanks to all for posting theirs on here.

 

[jacksonbrown]

Second that on making the title stand out. Love the photo and the effects added, but we need to see the title. It just disappears a bit too much.

 

[homebrewer_99]

OK, so I've been drinking...

It took me about 3 seconds to realize that was a bird feeder on the left.

I think Winter Nectar sounds better than Winter's Nectar...just my opinion.

I took a lot of B&W when I was younger, so you got me there...I like that..., but the color of the lettering should be different. I don't know which color, but maybe not what you are using. Is it possible to change the color and have several versions (colors) to look at? I just think some other color would stick out better.

Ask yourself...the scene is winter...you have a bird feeder...what's a winter bird? A cardinal...add a cardinal to the pic and cardinal (red) lettering and just maybe... Like I said...I've been drinking...

 

[GIusedtoBe]

OK, so I've been drinking...

It took me about 3 seconds to realize that was a bird feeder on the left.

I think Winter Nectar sounds better than Winter's Nectar...just my opinion.

I took a lot of B&W when I was younger, so you got me there...I like that..., but the color of the lettering should be different. I don't know which color, but maybe not what you are using. Is it possible to change the color and have several versions (colors) to look at? I just think some other color would stick out better.

Ask yourself...the scene is winter...you have a bird feeder...what's a winter bird? A cardinal...add a cardinal to the pic and cardinal (red) lettering and just maybe... Like I said...I've been drinking...

Nice! I've had a few of my strong ESB's as well and I did'nt know it was a birdfeeder until I read your post!

Regards,
Al

 

[bigjohnmilford]

The label looks nice. Enough with anything winter though.

 

[Greenspey]

Here's Take Two with different colors and a bird.

 

[slnies]

Here's Take Two with different colors and a bird.

Take two is great. Ditch the bird though, it looks corny. Otherwise classy.S.:rockin: