Looks also good, athough I would have skipped the sugar in a beer like this. If I would want the attenuation to be higher, I would mash longer and lower instead of using sugar. Sugar is for me just something to help attenuation if every other possibility ahs already been used and with US 05 or similar, there shouldn't be a need for it.
I borrowed the grain bill from Sierra Nevadas Pale Ale, which they share on their homepage. I think keeping it as simple as possible is a good idea.