Hey all - brewed my first beer last night. I was wondering if you could critique my notes below which were written as I brewed. Specifically, I'm looking for things to add/delete as I move from extract to AG. Note I still need a hydrometer and thermometer 
Smashing Pumpkin Ale (1G Homebrew Recipe Kit)
9/9/15
Put 1.25G of hot water (tap water on highest setting for a few minutes) into pot. Did so with 10, 2 cup fills in measuring cup, poured into kettle. Moved kettle from sink onto stovetop and turned to medium (5) heat (timestamp 7:24).
7:25 Began steeping grains in cloth mesh (came with kit)
7:35 removed grains/mesh and discarded. Turned on stove top to High (9)
7:43 Boil is reached
7:45 1.5lb Maillard Malts Gold Malt Extract Syrup (100% malted barley) is slowly poured into kettle while stirring with steel whisker. Used sanitized spoon to get remaining extract out of jar. Small packet of hops from kit (3.5g Cascade hope pellets, Alpha 6.8% HP13T) added immediately after. These additions cause wort to stop full boil.
7:46 Full boil reached again, maintained heat setting at 7 throughout boil
8:28 Turned off heat, moved kettle to room-temp surface, added in spice kit. Put quickly back on stove to boil in spices instead of whisking.
8:28 Put covered kettle into cold water in sink. Kettle cover had been sanitized for a few minutes beforehand.
9:16 Kettle feels around room temperature.
9:20 Started siphoning beer from kettle into sanitized 1G carboy.
9:23-24 Gently stirred beer with cap on to aerate wort and added half packet of yeast (Dry Ale Yeast).
9:25 Put 1TB sanitizer water into airlock, capped carboy, and put in closet for fermentation to begin.
9/10/15
7:10 Check carboy - 1in foam head has formed and airlock is bubbling. Fermentation appears to have begun.
Observations: Small (3in wide by 1in tall) foam consistently at south facing side of kettle’s wall throughout boil, after extract and hops were added.
Smashing Pumpkin Ale (1G Homebrew Recipe Kit)
9/9/15
Put 1.25G of hot water (tap water on highest setting for a few minutes) into pot. Did so with 10, 2 cup fills in measuring cup, poured into kettle. Moved kettle from sink onto stovetop and turned to medium (5) heat (timestamp 7:24).
7:25 Began steeping grains in cloth mesh (came with kit)
7:35 removed grains/mesh and discarded. Turned on stove top to High (9)
7:43 Boil is reached
7:45 1.5lb Maillard Malts Gold Malt Extract Syrup (100% malted barley) is slowly poured into kettle while stirring with steel whisker. Used sanitized spoon to get remaining extract out of jar. Small packet of hops from kit (3.5g Cascade hope pellets, Alpha 6.8% HP13T) added immediately after. These additions cause wort to stop full boil.
7:46 Full boil reached again, maintained heat setting at 7 throughout boil
8:28 Turned off heat, moved kettle to room-temp surface, added in spice kit. Put quickly back on stove to boil in spices instead of whisking.
8:28 Put covered kettle into cold water in sink. Kettle cover had been sanitized for a few minutes beforehand.
9:16 Kettle feels around room temperature.
9:20 Started siphoning beer from kettle into sanitized 1G carboy.
9:23-24 Gently stirred beer with cap on to aerate wort and added half packet of yeast (Dry Ale Yeast).
9:25 Put 1TB sanitizer water into airlock, capped carboy, and put in closet for fermentation to begin.
9/10/15
7:10 Check carboy - 1in foam head has formed and airlock is bubbling. Fermentation appears to have begun.
Observations: Small (3in wide by 1in tall) foam consistently at south facing side of kettle’s wall throughout boil, after extract and hops were added.