I've always just followed recipes for my brewing and never attempted to make my own. From the experience I have gained from brewing this is what I have come up with. I am shooting for a beer that is not too heavy. Be harsh in your evaluations as I do not want to make a beer that is not good.
5.5 lb extra pale LME
1 lb munich malt
8 oz carapils
8 oz crystal 20L
8 oz victory malt
8 oz special roast
0.5 oz us saaz for 60min
0.5 oz us tettnang for 30min
0.5 oz us tettnang finishing
irish moss
wyeast 1099
5.5 lb extra pale LME
1 lb munich malt
8 oz carapils
8 oz crystal 20L
8 oz victory malt
8 oz special roast
0.5 oz us saaz for 60min
0.5 oz us tettnang for 30min
0.5 oz us tettnang finishing
irish moss
wyeast 1099