Okay, testing is complete and I'm going with this one:
Here were my two test designs:
I'll call this one "loopy"
and this one is "straight bar"
I didn't have enough 90s to properly complete loopy's test design so I had to modify the manifold a bit to make it work (see tape on corners). To keep all thing equal I kept the modified design on both options for testing purposes.
Both modified designs finished draining the water within 10 seconds of each other (1:50ish) both leaving between 25-30 ounces. It wasn't a big difference. I decided to run with straight bar because loopy was a pain to hook up each time I moved it. I could see this becoming a problem because I doubt I would be able to permanently solder them at the correct angles and it takes a while to hook them up. If I did managed to solder them in the exact angle needed, cleaning it would be a *****. Straight bar was easy to hook up and it would be easy to clean. Plus, It would also allow me to solder the end peices so I don't have to put a puzzle together each time.
When I fixed the straight bar design and used 90s at the corners like I'm supposed to, it drained the water about 30 seconds faster and only left 8 ounces behind.
I'm happy with this build right now, so we'll see how it does on my first all grain batch in a week or two.
Thanks to those of you who had comments and suggestions. You gave me great ideas and helped me figure out what I want.
Day_tripper, I hope you are ALL happy with the final design!