To answer your first comment, metallic would suggest using some type of metal contacting the beer during the process that's not stainless still or the water itself. I know the author of this pdf and he's a grand master bjcp judge.
http://www.bjcp.org/cep/Metallic_Flavors.pdf It could be the additions of minerals you put in or the spices you did.
If your having a tough time picking out hop character it could be that is subtle in your recipe. Meaning one addition at flavoring at an ounce or less. Just add more if you want more hop character or change the type of hop. Most American hops have lots of flavor and very little may go a long way. Continental hops additions need to be a bit higher to taste the hops. If you want some flavor hop character increase the late addition. Make an American brown ale or porter. There can be a hint of citrus with those bold malt flavors. Black butte porter is a very good example. If your seeking aroma add an ounce or half an ounce during a dry hop session. Increase if you want more.
Temp during fermentation isn't the key for bitterness. Bitterness comes from the alpha acids in the hops. When you add too much hops during the 60 minute mark will contribute to bitterness. If it's too bitter reduce the hop amount by 1/4 an ounce or move the addition time to 45 mins.
These techniques really don't fall online of your topic but they will help with what I think your looking for. If your making solid beer and it taste good it might not be the water just the process and recipe manipulation.
I know this is long and I hope it helps. Another good tool find a homebrew club find the highest ranking judge and become his or her hip!
Anything else I can try and answer or make clearer. Cheers Ted