Very, very nice. Color base is cohesive and the font is spot on...
Suggestion, lower the abv and the fl. oz. down to the first little tribal out cropping just above the "V" and "Y". They seem to fight for attention aesthetically around the "villian" this would allow him to be the predominate form. Just sayin'
v
i prefer the first draft.
First draft had better balance.. The white space isnt adding anything or emphasizing anything. If the Villain "popped" more it could carry the space.
But that is also looking at it flat. On a bottle it may need that space.
This is splitting hairs of course, but if this were a critique before I showed this to a client, I would go back to the first one or activate that space a bit.
Again... its great. NO worries either way. You will impress people when you show it to them.
jason
O.k. I tried to post some pictures, but they looked HORRIBLE....how do you post an image?
Better, what did you "save as" to get the quality so well? I am working with AI but I am not a designer...please help.
v
Very slick.
Dont kid yourself... A great deal of the Graphic Designers out there do just what you did and call it theirs. I had a prof. in college (for graphic design) that used to say that the real skill was in bringing the elements together in a harmony that speaks to people.
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