jds
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Here's hoping for some constructive criticism. I'm going for simple, easy to read, and fun. My skin is thick, so please critique away! Thanks
onecolumbyte said:Very Much like the recycle logo. I might have to steal it. It's one of my pet peeves when I don't get the bottles back.
I'd get "big, fat" out of the description. We know that from the bold title. Work some other adjectives into it. How bout, voluptuous, huge, humongous, obese, gigantic, etc.
jds said:Jon:
Thanks! That's EXACTLY the kind of feedback I was hoping for. Graphic design background? Me, I'm an engineer, so anything more complicated than Times Roman and Arial is doing well. Look for a revision sometime after next week.
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