Oktoberfest Bier
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IMO, the "Limited Edition" "2008" parts look out of place.
Also, there is nothing tying it all together. It is just kind of bland.
But +1 for the Brew Maiden
Also, there is nothing tying it all together. It is just kind of bland.
But +1 for the Brew Maiden
Borisbbadd
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I like the idea, but I also agree, the Limited Edition - 2008 don't fit with the lable.
Chick is hot and the white background is a great base for a label.
"Limited Edition" is hard to read and is out of place, as is the 2008. I'd put it along a horizontal line towards the bottom or right below Oktoberfest Bier. 2008 should be half the size of Oktoberfest Bier and Limited Edition should be half the size of 2008.
"Limited Edition" is hard to read and is out of place, as is the 2008. I'd put it along a horizontal line towards the bottom or right below Oktoberfest Bier. 2008 should be half the size of Oktoberfest Bier and Limited Edition should be half the size of 2008.
Bavarian blue checker flag motif should be in there somewhere.
And there is no need to literally translate "West Palm Beach, Florida, America"
It just doesn't really translate...I speak pretty fluent German, and I was even confused by this. . .
Love the Maedchen, though.. . .
It just doesn't really translate...I speak pretty fluent German, and I was even confused by this. . .
Love the Maedchen, though.. . .
