This is my first attempt at creating a recipe, so I'd love some input before I go out and buy the ingredients. I'm going for a light, refreshing beer that brings to mind homemade strawberry rhubarb pie - fruity, sweet, tangy, with toasty/roasty hints of the crust. I don't want it to be "pie in a bottle", but don't want the fruit flavors to be overly subtle either. Middle of the road in terms of a fruit beer, I guess. As I said, it's my first attempt at a recipe, so be gentle with me... 
Ingredients
Amount Item Type % or IBU
14 lbs Pale Malt, Maris Otter (3.0 SRM) Grain 73.68 %
2 lbs Wheat Malt, Ger (2.0 SRM) Grain 10.53 %
1 lbs Caramel/Crystal Malt - 10L (10.0 SRM) Grain 5.26 %
1 lbs Toasted Malt (27.0 SRM) Grain 5.26 %
1 lbs Brown Sugar, Light (8.0 SRM) Sugar 5.26 %
1.50 oz Cluster [7.00 %] (60 min) Hops 18.3 IBU
1.00 oz Tettnang [4.50 %] (5 min) Hops 1.6 IBU
10.00 lb Rhubarb (Primary 7.0 days) Misc
8.00 lb Strawberries (Secondary 7.0 days) Misc
1 Pkgs American Ale II (Wyeast Labs #1272) [Starter 1500 ml] Yeast-Ale
Beer Profile
Est Original Gravity: 1.055 SG
Est Final Gravity: 1.014 SG
Estimated Alcohol by Vol: 5.41 %
Bitterness: 19.9 IBU
Est Color: 6.8 SRM
Beersmith doesn't seem to be able to account for fermentable sugar in fruit additions, so I'm not sure how that would affect the OG. There's not a ton of aroma to rhubarb so I think it will be fine in the primary to just add some flavor and tartness. I'll save the strawberries for the secondary to hopefully get flavor, sugar and aroma out of them. I'm hoping the combination of Marris Otter and a pound of toasted malt (home-toasted MO, probably) will hint at a crust flavor, while the brown sugar might help add to the caramelized-sugar effect you get from the baked pie. I'm toying with the idea of roasting the rhubarb (and maybe brown sugar) to actually caramelize the fruit before adding to the fermenter.
If anyone sees any glaring problems with this recipe, please let me know what, and how you would "fix" it. Thanks!
Ingredients
Amount Item Type % or IBU
14 lbs Pale Malt, Maris Otter (3.0 SRM) Grain 73.68 %
2 lbs Wheat Malt, Ger (2.0 SRM) Grain 10.53 %
1 lbs Caramel/Crystal Malt - 10L (10.0 SRM) Grain 5.26 %
1 lbs Toasted Malt (27.0 SRM) Grain 5.26 %
1 lbs Brown Sugar, Light (8.0 SRM) Sugar 5.26 %
1.50 oz Cluster [7.00 %] (60 min) Hops 18.3 IBU
1.00 oz Tettnang [4.50 %] (5 min) Hops 1.6 IBU
10.00 lb Rhubarb (Primary 7.0 days) Misc
8.00 lb Strawberries (Secondary 7.0 days) Misc
1 Pkgs American Ale II (Wyeast Labs #1272) [Starter 1500 ml] Yeast-Ale
Beer Profile
Est Original Gravity: 1.055 SG
Est Final Gravity: 1.014 SG
Estimated Alcohol by Vol: 5.41 %
Bitterness: 19.9 IBU
Est Color: 6.8 SRM
Beersmith doesn't seem to be able to account for fermentable sugar in fruit additions, so I'm not sure how that would affect the OG. There's not a ton of aroma to rhubarb so I think it will be fine in the primary to just add some flavor and tartness. I'll save the strawberries for the secondary to hopefully get flavor, sugar and aroma out of them. I'm hoping the combination of Marris Otter and a pound of toasted malt (home-toasted MO, probably) will hint at a crust flavor, while the brown sugar might help add to the caramelized-sugar effect you get from the baked pie. I'm toying with the idea of roasting the rhubarb (and maybe brown sugar) to actually caramelize the fruit before adding to the fermenter.
If anyone sees any glaring problems with this recipe, please let me know what, and how you would "fix" it. Thanks!