Short Snout Brewing Logo - Feedback

[Ryan_PA]

You have the O's in Short and Snout evenly spaced off center. Why not try to use the dog heads inside the O's. This may help with the balance. Then you could use the space under for the barley and some text. You could even use a faded or distressed paw print in the background to frame in the barley and other elements.

 

[Bob]

No matter where you go, his eyes seem to...follow you...

[shudder]

Not to slam anyone's work or anything - 'cos it's light-years beyond anything I could do - but the dog is really creeping me out. It's got this crazy, hypnotizing "mesmer-stare" that's totally putting me around the bend.

Seriously. Look him dead in the eyes. Can't you hear him?

Can't you?!

Bob

 

[Skunkhuffer]

No matter where you go, his eyes seem to...follow you...

Seriously. Look him dead in the eyes. Can't you hear him?

Hilarious. Glad the eyes are serving their purpose!

You have the O's in Short and Snout evenly spaced off center. Why not try to use the dog heads inside the O's. This may help with the balance. Then you could use the space under for the barley and some text. You could even use a faded or distressed paw print in the background to frame in the barley and other elements.

I dont think I fully understand what you're saying. But as far as the dogs heads as the Os, I don't really like that idea because when printed, the label is small and the detail in the dogs heads would be very minimal. Also the spacing of the letters would need to be altered, and I don't see it looking "good".

Great work skunk! What program are you working in?

Thanks a bunch.... Photoshop on OSX.

 

[Ecnerwal]

Turn the pugs to point out (side-on, away from the center), and give each one a St. Bernard style barrel ;-) ???

Or have them on the outside, facing in, framing the text?