I think your hop schedule will be fine. I have made the Pliny from the pdf 3 times, and it's been great. I have also made Jamil's Evil Twin, and it didn't come out very red for me, so hopefully you will have better luck. I will be bottling my imperial red, recipe above, in a few days, so I'll post a picture of that. Incidentally, I decided to divide the dry hop into 2 separate additions, based on the success of the Pliny clone.