Believe me, you English is much better than a lot of folks way down south! Try understanding some Bayou! And they are supposed to be speaking English!
Nah, it's not the language that the problem. Adding the period and the capital letters helped a LOT.
Sounds like you are doing what a lot of homebrewers do when starting out: Making extract kits. Nothing unusual or different that I can see. Some people still prefer to add sugar to the recipe and others like to add extract instead. Either way works, it just depends on what you like your beer to taste like.