My First Label

[mizzoueng]

This is my first label. Made most by hand using Adobe Designer. All the images are pulled from google.

EDIT: A lot of people have looked at my label, does anyone have any comments or corrections they think I should make?

 

[razyrsharpe]

i like the design. personally i would make the lawnmower larger.

 

[McKBrew]

i like the design. personally i would make the lawnmower larger.

I agree. The Lawnmower should definately be a central theme of the label. You have quite a bit of open space still.

 

[kenmc]

yeah the lawnmower man is pretty tiny, the grass overpowers the label

 

[mizzoueng]

Okay, made the lawnmower larger and I added balck boxes so the sides were easier to read. I had some complaints that the text on the sides blended in with the grass and made it hard to read.

 

[McCall St. Brewer]

That's much better. I would make the lawnmower even a little bit bigger, though, if possible. Nice work, though.

 

[zythos]

That does look a lot better than the original. My only suggestion, being that it appears to be a summer beer, I would look for a more summery color than black. I might even go as far as to do the sides yellow with green text or something along that direction. That's up to you though, it looks good as it is.

 

[McKBrew]

Yellow and Green on the sides, with a different mower if you can find it. Maybe a John Deere theme???

 

[troybinso]

You might want to throw that text in to a spell checker. I think it is "coriander" and "spicy".