I really disagree with how you are trying to convince him...informing him of potential damages from your brewing isn't going to help. He will just use those as reasons not to let you brew.
Your document outlines brewing well, but i don't think he is even going to get past the first two paragraphs.
Call me a negative Nancy, but i see this failing. He doesn't want you brewing and you are telling him if he doesn't want you to, then you won't. He will just stick to his "no". Brew in your apartment and find a way to ferment inside. Further, wait till after you re-sign your lease till you bring all this up, this way he is less likely to include a no brew clause.
Either way, good luck. I do think you are approaching this in the most logical and adult manner. Unfortunately most people don't care and just want things their way. I hope you let us know how it goes and that you proved me, and others wrong.
Your document outlines brewing well, but i don't think he is even going to get past the first two paragraphs.
Call me a negative Nancy, but i see this failing. He doesn't want you brewing and you are telling him if he doesn't want you to, then you won't. He will just stick to his "no". Brew in your apartment and find a way to ferment inside. Further, wait till after you re-sign your lease till you bring all this up, this way he is less likely to include a no brew clause.
Either way, good luck. I do think you are approaching this in the most logical and adult manner. Unfortunately most people don't care and just want things their way. I hope you let us know how it goes and that you proved me, and others wrong.