Neither of those sets of scoresheets really give you much feedback on what judge think you can do better. I enter a lot of comps...what I look at first, well second since score is first, is the ranking of judges. Like in first set of sheets, you have a certified judge and a non-ranked "homebrewer"...I would then really focus on what only the certified judge states because is the homebrewer really judging to style guidelines, or to his personal preferences. Then for the second set, the National judge's opinion would matter more to me. For example, a guy in my club in an internal club comp scored every beer 20, because he did not like the style...he did not judge on guidelines, so we had to toss his scores.
I have a national ranked judge in my club, he said what you also need to look at is regional bias...that a beer that scores well in say New England, will not score as well in Midwest, etc. Judging is all subjective too, was your beer early in a flight, late in a flight meaning the judge had palette fatigue. Was it early in the morning where the judges were just starting out, or late in day after they also judges other sides.
I mean a 37.5 average is a great overall score for that beer and it could be some slight tweaks, like using a different base malt, for example being a British Brown, I am making the assumption that there is Maris Otter in it? Then try Crisp's Heritage Chevalier instead. National judge mentions possible fermentation issue...do you have temp control when you ferment? Did the yeast fully attenuate? Maybe try a different yeast.
It's definitely frustrating at times...I have a Czech Dark that does well in comps, the 2019 version averaged 44 (1st place), 37 at NHC regional (2nd place), 41 (2nd place) and then a 27...so obviously, there was something wrong there. Those first 3 scores...all East Coast comps...the last one, in Utah. What the heck did those judges not like that others did? Was that the regionable bias coming into play. Czech Dark is not a common beer in the US, so judges don't get to drink samples to know what it tastes like, was that a factor? Maybe. In fact, I sent 4 beers to that comp that had all medaled previously in other comps and the highest score I got was a 32. By the way, I then took the judges comments from the three good scoring comps and slightly tweaked a rebrew of the Czech Dark for NHC Finals and came this close to medaling...it took a 39 and was at the final table for medal contention.