71f isn't "too" hot for S-04, but I've been getting great results down around 58 to 62 for the first few days, then letting it climb over the next couple of weeks.
Have got a similar batch to yours on the go right now but only 2.5 gallons. Used
2.25kg MO, 250g English Crystal 70, 250g brown sugar and 14g chocolate wheat. Using Kent Golding and Fuggles.
Here's the recipe;
Malt & Fermentables
% LB OZ °L PPG
81% 4 15.4 Marris Otter (Crisp) Mash 4° 38
9% ~ 8.82 British Crystal 70-80L Mash 75° 33
9% ~ 8.82 Brown Sugar, Light Boil 8° 46
1% ~ 0.49 Chocolate Wheat Mash 400° 33
Total grain bill 6lbs 1.5Oz
Specific Gravity
1.069 OG
(1.061 to 1.072)
16.8° Plato
1.019 FG
(1.016 to 1.020)
4.8° Plato
Measured Values
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Color
15° SRM
30° EBC
Light Brown to Medium Brown
Mash Efficiency
75 %
Hops
Usage Time OZ AA » IBU
boil 60 min 0.494 Nugget ~ pellet 11.4 » 35.9
boil 15 min 0.353 Fuggles ~ pellet 4.1 » 4.6
boil 15 min 0.353 Kent Golding ~ pellet 5.1 » 5.7
boil 5 min 0.282 Fuggles ~ pellet 4.1 » 1.5
boil 5 min 0.282 Kent Golding ~ pellet 5.1 » 1.8
Bitterness
49.4 IBU
ƒ: Tinseth
6 HBU
BU:GU
0.72
Yeast
Safale S-04 Dry Yeast
yeast in dry form with high flocculation and 73% attenuation
Alcohol
6.7% ABV
5.0% ABW
Calories
228
per 12 oz.
Don't forget that East Kent Goldings are supposed to impart a sweet flavour.
Don't think you necessarily have to decrease your grain bill any, is what I'm trying to say.
Seems to me that the OP realizes, and said in his first post, that keeping the mash temps better adjusted would be one of the objectives next time he brews this one. OP's OG to FG of 1.055 to 1.018 definitely suggests slightly low attenuation which could be attributable to some unfermentable sugars from a high mash.
With the batch I did, BIAB, the mash temps were between 149-155 for an hour and then I left the wort to cool down for a few hours after. Hit my post boil OG near enough spot on, 1.068 to 1.070 and the sample I took a week ago, after ten days of primary, was right on 1.018 to 1.020. Tasted OK, as in not overly sweet so I'm wondering if the Fuggles' earthiness acts as a good balance for the EKG's sweetness.