Thundercougarfalconbird
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So, I had to write a persona poem and use jargon for my Creative writing class. SOOO, here ya go. I'm happy to accept criticism but its more for me to flex my appreciation to the forums and this art we partake in.
IPA
My foamy head gurgling over my shoulder and down my sides
Marvel at my brilliant golden hues
Tiny bubbles fleeing my depths
My scent, A flowery invitation
Freshly poured
Hike my Pilsner glass abode,
Floral bitter biting your buds
Simcoe, Warrior, and Amarillo wed in complexity
Six row, two row malty brawn
A night pass, A six pack
No lite swill will muddle your palate this night
Wort conceived and yeast born
Destined to die by your hand, your lip and your gum
Goodbye kind world, left with arboreal wafting bliss
And the now fuzzy light of the night-posts
Edit: Not too sure how to double space on the forums. But its supposed to be >_>
IPA
My foamy head gurgling over my shoulder and down my sides
Marvel at my brilliant golden hues
Tiny bubbles fleeing my depths
My scent, A flowery invitation
Freshly poured
Hike my Pilsner glass abode,
Floral bitter biting your buds
Simcoe, Warrior, and Amarillo wed in complexity
Six row, two row malty brawn
A night pass, A six pack
No lite swill will muddle your palate this night
Wort conceived and yeast born
Destined to die by your hand, your lip and your gum
Goodbye kind world, left with arboreal wafting bliss
And the now fuzzy light of the night-posts
Edit: Not too sure how to double space on the forums. But its supposed to be >_>