Almost Organic Special Bitter

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scottfro

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This isn't the final version but close enough to get some feedback.

Thoughts?



Thanks to SuperiorBrew for the high res hop photo.
 

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I think it's beautiful. You incorporated so much -- the ingredient pix, the logo, the "mission statement," the bottle return plea -- and yet it's still a clean look. I think all the horizontal lines accomplish that.

You've got a typo: Please return this bottle to it's...
Should be: Please return the bottle to its...
 
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thank you for the kind words, i'm glad you like it.

and thanks for catching the typo! i'm so bad about it's vs its haha
 

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Very nice, I like it. The part about returning the bottle, along with the recycling logo, is a nice touch.

And it looks like you misspelled "orginating", it should be "originating". Nice job!
 
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hahah thank you everyone for catching my grammar and spelling errors!

going to make a few color variations to pick the best then go to print with this i think.
 
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so i just made a ton of changes when i started working with this other font. is anyone partial to this one over the other?

 

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I vote for the first one, too. That font takes advantage of all the clean geometric lines. This one stirs them up and makes the whole thing feel sorta dizzying.
 

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I like the 1st one better too. The 2nd one reminds me too much of a Magic Hat label. :D
 
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