Almost Organic Special Bitter

[scottfro]

This isn't the final version but close enough to get some feedback.

Thoughts?

Thanks to SuperiorBrew for the high res hop photo.

 

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I think it's beautiful. You incorporated so much -- the ingredient pix, the logo, the "mission statement," the bottle return plea -- and yet it's still a clean look. I think all the horizontal lines accomplish that.

You've got a typo: Please return this bottle to it's...
Should be: Please return the bottle to its...

 

[scottfro]

thank you for the kind words, i'm glad you like it.

and thanks for catching the typo! i'm so bad about it's vs its haha

 

[fermenator]

Awesome label! Very professional

 

[scottfro]

thanks....any other thoughts/criticisms?

 

[Yuri_Rage]

I like it, and I agree 100% with everything already said.

Another nit pick...it's "bottle conditioned," not "bottled conditioned."

 

[JustDave]

Very nice, I like it. The part about returning the bottle, along with the recycling logo, is a nice touch.

And it looks like you misspelled "orginating", it should be "originating". Nice job!

 

[scottfro]

hahah thank you everyone for catching my grammar and spelling errors!

going to make a few color variations to pick the best then go to print with this i think.

 

[scottfro]

so i just made a ton of changes when i started working with this other font. is anyone partial to this one over the other?

 

[Loweface]

I prefer the first one... It has just enough simplicity to work great...

 

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I vote for the first one, too. That font takes advantage of all the clean geometric lines. This one stirs them up and makes the whole thing feel sorta dizzying.

 

[RoaringBrewer]

First one for certain... the second one looks like a neon light...

 

[JustDave]

I like the 1st one better too. The 2nd one reminds me too much of a Magic Hat label.

 

[Boerderij_Kabouter]

+1 for the first design. Looks great

 

[scottfro]

thank you for all the thoughts, here is the final product.

 

[JustDave]

That looks really good on the bottle. Nicely done!