Alright here is what I did.
11 lbs 5 oz golden promise
9 oz crystal 20L
6 oz crystal 10L
9 oz white wheat
S-04 yeast with a 1.0L starter
Hops
1 oz FWH
.25 oz 10'
.75 oz 5'
2 oz 1'
2 oz hopstand at flameout - let cool to 180 ~15'
3 oz hopstand at 180-175 for 25'
2 oz dryhop - 7 days
2 oz dryhop - 4 days
Mash
20' protein rest at 133
60' mash at 153
(used purified water from store rather than harsh Madison water)
Fermentation at 68-70
Tasting Notes with side by side comparison of the real Psuedo...
The clone is WAY too hazy. There is absolutely zero wheat in the current batch of pseudo. I swear this beer was once cloudy, but it absolutely is not now.
The color is Very close. The haziness throws it off, but I will up the Crystal 20L a few notches. Only about 1-2 L off.
The clone is slightly too bitter. I think they must use some bittering hops, but only a little. I will cut it down to .5 oz of FWH (a.a. of 12.5%)
The aroma is right on! I think the two hopstands were KEY. I honestly don't know that my dryhops added all that much to the aroma. In fact, I think the last batch of Citra I purchased was a bit "stale". I noticed it when I opened the packages. I could notice it again when I was trying the finished product (Though nobody else in the group could, one of the tasters thought mine was better than the real deal). I think this is where the biggest issue with clones is. We have to buy these little packets of hops and hope they are all fresh. The brewer buys in BULK and they get the best of the best. For a single hop beer, this makes a big difference.
Here are my suggestions...
Absolutely no sugar added. Bump the crystal 20L for a bit of color. Body was right on. No white wheat at all. May have to bump the crystal 10L to compensate for the loss of wheat. The low mash temp is correct. The yeast also seems good, though I cannot compare it to the S-05 as others have. May reduce the hopstand by an ounce and spread it across the earlier hop additions to increase the hop complexity.
Alright, Cheers and good luck!