Since you arn't trying to sell this (I am assuming) I would take the Dry Hopped out. I think it looks like something BMC would do to pull someone in. Maybe note that with the ingredients, or make it more subtle.
Other than that, it is a really great label, and looks worthy of a commercial brew. ONTOH the Dry Hopped! adds to the authenticity of looking like a commercial beer if that is what you are going for.
Looks really good. I also would move/remove the 'Dry Hopped' lettering. Also, I really like the background texture. The lettering for the name is slightly difficult to read, I wonder if you angled the words from bottom left to top right (once you removed the 'Dry Hopped' letters) you could either spread the letters a little more or make the font larger. Don't know if it would work.
Good work... really like it... interesting label but very clean.
Was thinking there needs to be a magnifying glass somewhere for the "incongita" part... like your searching for something. Maybe I'm nuts.
How can I like it more?... but I do! Great! Love the name. Looks like something Dr. Livingston would have drank while traversing the dark continent. Nice.
I would have saved the name and the label for a dark beer, probably a RIS or other expedition style beer. I think the name and theme of this label are inconsistent with a house beer, especially a pale ale.