Olde Puritan - new label

[riromero]

I'm going for a traditional look to go with my mild brown ale. Comments?

 

[Scut_Monkey]

I would like it a lot more if there wasn't so much yellow. I really like the central green portion. The details are nice and it is traditional looking.

 

[jschaf]

That is classy, but maybe try some other colors instead of yellow.

 

[Orangevango]

Do the background more of a aged parchment kinda thing.

 

[greencoat]

I love it.

 

[Scut_Monkey]

Do the background more of a aged parchment kinda thing.

I agree with the above. I think this would really make it look authentic and set it off.

 

[riromero]

New version:

1) Ditched the yellow.
2) Added paper texture
3) Added ingredients, etc.
4) Eliminated dead space.

 

[Scut_Monkey]

I'm digging it dawg. It looks much more traditional now and very nice. Me likes!

 

[Sithdad]

Your label looks really good. The parchment background really rounded the whole thing out. Just one recommendation, and it's really just to make it "different", but perhaps rewording the "Ready on:" "Open and enjoy on:". Really just to make it more like a personalized label, but otherwise really nice job.

 

[homebrewer_99]

Your label looks really good. The parchment background really rounded the whole thing out. Just one recommendation, and it's really just to make it "different", but perhaps rewording the "Ready on:" "Open and enjoy on:". Really just to make it more like a personalized label, but otherwise really nice job.

I agree...maybe something like: Bottle Conditioned on, then date.

 

[Orangevango]

I love it with the parchment look!

 

[MeatyPortion]

Looks great. Excellent job.

 

[I_Keeps_It_Real]

i think leaving the ingredients out makes it seem more traditional