It's an IPA. Some degree of haze is appropriate for the style.
21A - American IPA
Appearance: Color ranges from medium gold to light reddish-amber. Should be clear, although unfiltered dryhopped versions may be a bit hazy.
Would you say a cloudy wheat beer is "not acceptable in a commercial beer?" It's to style.
That's a Double IPA, which is also allowed/supposed to be cloudy, according to the style guidelines. The examples posted are not examples of flaws - they are examples of beers brewed to style.
Now, if you show me a commercial example of a cloudy Czech Pale Lager ("Brilliant to very clear," according to the style guidelines), then you'd have a point.