thebluewaffle
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Hey guys I am a college student who has recently become addicted to home brewing. I am doing my speech on home brewing and would like some constructive criticism to my outline. Maybe some things that I should add or change. Figured I get the experts to do this rather than my roomate.
Just to let you know I am 22 I managed to not have to take a speech class until my last semester of college. Here it is.
As college students I am going to take a wild guess that almost all of you have had a beer or two. And since most of you are under 21 you have some challenges getting beer. What if I told you it is perfectly legal for you to make all the beer you could ever drink and for half the price. I have already made over 10 cases of my own beer. I have made Oktoberfest, Pale Ales, Blonde Ales, and an IPA all of which were cheaper and tasted way better than the typical college can of beer. Today I am going to teach you the basics of home brewing. You will learn everything you need to know to be able to go home and start brewing tonight. Within a month you could be bringing your own home made beer to the next party. There are three basic steps to making beer. First is brewing your four major ingredients together water, grain, hops, and yeast. Second is fermenting your mixture into alcohol and third is carbonating and conditioning your brew into a great tasting beer. Lets begin with brewing the mixture you will be fermenting.
1. Beer is made from four basic ingredients, water, grain, hops, and yeast.
A. Great tasting water makes better beer.
B. Steeping your grains in water breaks down the fibers and extracts fermentable sugars.
C. Adding hops gives the beer its bitterness, aroma, and flavor.
1. Hops preserves the beer, fights off parasites and bacteria.
2. In order to legally call your mixture beer it has to have hops in it.
D. Adding yeast transforms your wort into alcohol.
2. When you add yeast to the beer it creates alcohol.
A. Yeast is a living organism that consumes sugars and when it does its b
y product is alcohol and carbon dioxide
B. In order to keep beer clean you must put in a sealed container with an
airlock so the carbon dioxide can escape.
3. Bottling and conditioning the beer.
A. When you bottle the beer you add slightly more sugar for the yeast to co
nsume trapping the carbon dioxide in the bottle carbonating the beer.
B. Conditioning takes anywhere from three weeks to three months leaving
You with cleaner smoother beer.
I will leave you with this. As college students we have barriers in the way of acquiring beer. It is illegal to buy, sometimes hard to find someone to buy it for us, and can get expensive. Brewing your own beer is a great solution to all of these problems you make it yourself for half the price of what the store charges. I love making beer and love the benefits and my friends do to. Just give it a try and I promise youll be hooked.
REVISION
Thanks for giving me some feedback it was a good eye opener.
Here is revision that I think is a lot better. I don't believe it makes me seem as if I encourage underage drinking. Give me some feedback guys.
1. Beer is made from four basic ingredients, water, grain, hops, and yeast.
A. Great tasting water makes better beer.
B. By submerging grains into hot water you are able to extract fermentable sugars.
C. Adding hops gives the beer its bitterness, aroma, and flavor.
1. Hops preserves the beer, fights off parasites and bacteria.
2. In order to legally call your mixture beer it has to have hops in it.
3. When yeast is added to sugar it consumes it producing alcohol and carbon dioxide
2.Fermentation is the process of turning sugars into alcohol.
A. Yeast is a living organism that consumes sugars and when it does its b
y product is alcohol and carbon dioxide
B. Beer must be in a bacteria free environment while at the same time having an escape area for carbon dioxide
C. Factors that can change the taste and smell of your beer during
fermentation
3. Bottling and conditioning the beer.
A. Trapping carbon dioxide inside the beer.
B. Different types of conditioning processes and their final affects on
flavor and aroma.
Let me end on this. Beer is not a complicated science it is more of an art. You are the chef with many varieties of ingredients to use, all you have to do is come up with that right combination to produce a wonderful great tasting beer. So give it a try, who knows maybe youll be the owner of Americas next great brewery.
Just to let you know I am 22 I managed to not have to take a speech class until my last semester of college. Here it is.
As college students I am going to take a wild guess that almost all of you have had a beer or two. And since most of you are under 21 you have some challenges getting beer. What if I told you it is perfectly legal for you to make all the beer you could ever drink and for half the price. I have already made over 10 cases of my own beer. I have made Oktoberfest, Pale Ales, Blonde Ales, and an IPA all of which were cheaper and tasted way better than the typical college can of beer. Today I am going to teach you the basics of home brewing. You will learn everything you need to know to be able to go home and start brewing tonight. Within a month you could be bringing your own home made beer to the next party. There are three basic steps to making beer. First is brewing your four major ingredients together water, grain, hops, and yeast. Second is fermenting your mixture into alcohol and third is carbonating and conditioning your brew into a great tasting beer. Lets begin with brewing the mixture you will be fermenting.
1. Beer is made from four basic ingredients, water, grain, hops, and yeast.
A. Great tasting water makes better beer.
B. Steeping your grains in water breaks down the fibers and extracts fermentable sugars.
C. Adding hops gives the beer its bitterness, aroma, and flavor.
1. Hops preserves the beer, fights off parasites and bacteria.
2. In order to legally call your mixture beer it has to have hops in it.
D. Adding yeast transforms your wort into alcohol.
2. When you add yeast to the beer it creates alcohol.
A. Yeast is a living organism that consumes sugars and when it does its b
y product is alcohol and carbon dioxide
B. In order to keep beer clean you must put in a sealed container with an
airlock so the carbon dioxide can escape.
3. Bottling and conditioning the beer.
A. When you bottle the beer you add slightly more sugar for the yeast to co
nsume trapping the carbon dioxide in the bottle carbonating the beer.
B. Conditioning takes anywhere from three weeks to three months leaving
You with cleaner smoother beer.
I will leave you with this. As college students we have barriers in the way of acquiring beer. It is illegal to buy, sometimes hard to find someone to buy it for us, and can get expensive. Brewing your own beer is a great solution to all of these problems you make it yourself for half the price of what the store charges. I love making beer and love the benefits and my friends do to. Just give it a try and I promise youll be hooked.
REVISION
Thanks for giving me some feedback it was a good eye opener.
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How Does Beer Work?
Beer has been produced for thousands of years. When ships began long journeys overseas they packed as much beer as they could carry in place of water because beer is not as easily perishable as water. The main reason for this is the addition of hops in the brewing process. Hops preserve things from being attacked by bacteria as well as imparting bitterness, aroma, and flavor. Along with hops, water, grains, and yeast are brewed together to ultimately form beer. Brewing beer may be a mystery to you, but I am going to change that by teaching you everything I know about creating this amazing beverage. Lets begin with creating your base mixture also know as wort. 1. Beer is made from four basic ingredients, water, grain, hops, and yeast.
A. Great tasting water makes better beer.
B. By submerging grains into hot water you are able to extract fermentable sugars.
C. Adding hops gives the beer its bitterness, aroma, and flavor.
1. Hops preserves the beer, fights off parasites and bacteria.
2. In order to legally call your mixture beer it has to have hops in it.
3. When yeast is added to sugar it consumes it producing alcohol and carbon dioxide
2.Fermentation is the process of turning sugars into alcohol.
A. Yeast is a living organism that consumes sugars and when it does its b
y product is alcohol and carbon dioxide
B. Beer must be in a bacteria free environment while at the same time having an escape area for carbon dioxide
C. Factors that can change the taste and smell of your beer during
fermentation
3. Bottling and conditioning the beer.
A. Trapping carbon dioxide inside the beer.
B. Different types of conditioning processes and their final affects on
flavor and aroma.
Let me end on this. Beer is not a complicated science it is more of an art. You are the chef with many varieties of ingredients to use, all you have to do is come up with that right combination to produce a wonderful great tasting beer. So give it a try, who knows maybe youll be the owner of Americas next great brewery.