You justified your choices well. I think they could work with maybe a few minor adjustments. But, this is YOUR beer and what I (or anyone else) might like in our version doesn't necessarily fit your version. OK, that's off my chest.....now to the suggestions.
I appreciate that. Yes, I brew for what I think I would like. It tends to transcend to what other people like as well. I am looking for suggestions mostly because I haven't used a majority of these mats ever. The Maris/Pearl is nothing more than me being cute. I agree that i don't think anyone would be able to pick up on the split. However, I did split it just to minimize the Maris.
If you haven't already, get a copy of Ray Daniel's 'Designing Great Beers'. It's really a great book that helps out with recipe creation.
Got it... Agreed....
The Victory (pretty much the same as biscuit malt), and flaked oats are good choices and amounts. I also think the amount of chocolate malt you have is not too much and won't give you any acridness or bitterness. I use brown malt in my porter, as it's traditional there, but it can lead to the bitterness/acridness that you don't want in a brown. But at 3.7%, you should be OK.
So. that's kinda what i was worried about: Too much crystal, and a bitterness that i don't want in a brown. But that's the exact reason why there's so much crystal. I typically shy away from crystal altogether. So with that much, i have to admit i'm nervous. But is it too much to be cloying, or enough the otherwise balance the bitterness of Chocolate and Brown malts? Hence, the reason for the post.
I'm also a fan of using a touch of midnight wheat for adding color and no roastiness. Bottom line, I think I would drink, and enjoy your version.
Thanks....
Man, you're funny. I actually got 3# of Midnight because i plan on fermenting 5 gallons as above, and then do a mini mash with the Wheat and add it to the renaming above wort, and call that a Porter. I want the brown to have just a hint of transparency while the porter, I want black as night.
So you guessed it... The crystal is where I'm hung up. The chocolate and brown, was a concern too, but more towards the not enough..... The Victory seemed like too much but from what I have read, 10% is good. Again, zero experience with most of these malts, and even the styles. I gravitate towards IPAs, Blondes, and toy around with Belgians. Browns...? Nope. Porters...? nope.
Any other advice? Any additions based on the grist and my desired ending result? Subtractions? And again, thanks.....[/QUOTE]