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Like I said, this is my first label, but the second batch of it.
It's a cream ale flavored SLIGHTLY with honey and blackberry.
This is just a mock-up so the alcohol content will change but as for the label idea, let me know what you think.

 
I really like it, very classic. I don't know what it is about the font though. In theory the gray should be perfect, but I wonder if maybe it should be darker and the lines should be lighter. Sorry, I'm just trying to find something to criticize :p

Really awesome label :mug:
 
WillPall said:
I really like it, very classic. I don't know what it is about the font though. In theory the gray should be perfect, but I wonder if maybe it should be darker and the lines should be lighter. Sorry, I'm just trying to find something to criticize :p

Really awesome label :mug:
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Yeah the font isn't my favorite either and I think i may do a stroke outline on it with a slightly lighter color once I find a good "old world" font. But as part of the creative process, I just needed feedback so thank you very much
 
I heard the other day that dark brown is actually the more traditional font color. You could try a mock up of that if the grey isn't quite working but you don't want black.
 
trish said:
I heard the other day that dark brown is actually the more traditional font color. You could try a mock up of that if the grey isn't quite working but you don't want black.
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Yeah definitely not black....
I like the grey (maybe darker) but I think then font choice is the main thing for now
 

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