H HOP-HEAD Well-Known Member Joined Oct 18, 2008 Messages 503 Reaction score 11 Location West Michigan Mar 1, 2009 #1 My second label for critique... still a work in progress, especially the write-up on the left, but I appreciate opinions...
My second label for critique... still a work in progress, especially the write-up on the left, but I appreciate opinions...
mbird Well-Known Member Joined Dec 28, 2008 Messages 309 Reaction score 0 Location California Mar 1, 2009 #2 I like it, but shouldn't those be hops the character is walking over? Anyway, nice label. mark Beer Diary...
I like it, but shouldn't those be hops the character is walking over? Anyway, nice label. mark Beer Diary...
OP OP H HOP-HEAD Well-Known Member Joined Oct 18, 2008 Messages 503 Reaction score 11 Location West Michigan Mar 1, 2009 #3 Yes they should.... still lookin' for a good pic. In the mean-time, I just liked the colors and sunset on this one.
Yes they should.... still lookin' for a good pic. In the mean-time, I just liked the colors and sunset on this one.
Superdave Well-Known Member Joined May 15, 2008 Messages 122 Reaction score 0 Location Manhattan Kansas Mar 17, 2009 #4 "... in India Pale Ale's, were actually..." India Pale Ale doesn't own "were" so it shouldn't have an apostrophe. Should just say "...in India Pale Ales, were actually..."
"... in India Pale Ale's, were actually..." India Pale Ale doesn't own "were" so it shouldn't have an apostrophe. Should just say "...in India Pale Ales, were actually..."
Pappers_ Moderator Emeritus HBT Supporter Joined Jan 31, 2009 Messages 17,908 Reaction score 4,419 Location Chicago Mar 18, 2009 #5 very whimsical
BeerMeChasay Active Member Joined Jan 6, 2009 Messages 34 Reaction score 0 Location Oregon Mar 19, 2009 #6 haha i like the 7.9% on the briefcase