Very Fairy Blackberry

[beer-monger]

Spent way to long working on this, but it came out nice I think.

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[david_42]

Quite nice indeed.

 

[BSBrewer]

you will probably get knocked for the papyrus font (I always do) but I like it alot - well done

 

[BargainMugs]

Yes, I would comment on the papyrus.

Other than a alternate font choice, I would try to vary the bees around the nest. They're a bit too symmetrical. Try creating a trail of bees, creating another visual line contrasting the line of the fairy's body. It could help balance the label.

 

[cruckin78]

I think it looks awesome!!
Good Job!

 

[beer-monger]

Whats wrong with Papyrus font? It's one of my favorites.

The Bee Hive was kind of an after thought almost didnt include it, or the symetrical bees for that matter. Not sure I follow you? BargainMug, Where would this proposed line of bees trail off to?

 

[BargainMugs]

Whats wrong with Papyrus font? It's one of my favorites.

The Bee Hive was kind of an after thought almost didnt include it, or the symetrical bees for that matter. Not sure I follow you? BargainMug, Where would this proposed line of bees trail off to?

Basically a trail of bees from the left side of the label leading to the hive. There might be similar fonts that can be more dynamic and suiting for your label. Check out dafont.com.

 

[Pappers_]

That's a really nice label! And I like the font, too.

 

[BSBrewer]

Papyrus is one of my favorites too - just seems like people either love it or hate it - and theres much more of the later on these boards...but your label should reflect what you want so I say long live papyrus!

 

[BargainMugs]

There are much worse fonts than papyrus. You could use comic sans or jokerman.

 

[beer-monger]

Well, the very fairy blackberry is already on the bottle. Papyrus font, symmetrical non-trailing bees and all. Only 3 bottles of it. printed in 4" x 4" on some sort of moisten the back and stick it label paper that the wife got for me. I had fun with these labels, so I decided to make labels for the original batch as well.

Here's How it came out.. I welcome any and all criticism