I think that the scores for the competition I entered are a little high. I was worried because I had heard that the IPA category in general were scored pretty low but then my score was very high and I did not even medal. I got first in the same comp for English Mild Ale with a 30 so who knows.
I brewed it all grain exactly as shown on the first page. Used RO water with 2 tsp gypsum added. I was working on equipment new to me so between 10-20 minutes after dough in my temps hit nearly 160 but quickly cooled back down to 151-152 for the rest of the mash. Fermented with S-04 and kept the temps pretty well controlled in the 64-66 range (was in basement not ferm chamber so some small fluctuations). In my mind it could have been better had the mash temps been under more precise control, however the comments seem to appreciate the little bit of extra sweetness/maltiness. I believe mine finished around 1.018 to 1.020.
Edit: One thing I think helped my score was that it was fined with gelatin. For future IPAs I think I would try to fine before the dry hop. To me the nose suffered a little but not much from the gelatin. It worked beautifully for me, after a gross pint the rest of the beer from the keg was a beautiful golden color you could see straight through. Not quite commercial clarity but very close and between the color, clarity, and head retention from the caramel malts it was a beauty.