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My first attempt at a label and logo for my brewery. Pretty simple for now as I am not that good at graphic design. Critique it, I wanna know what you guys think!
I do not like the location of hops

I really like it! I don't think you need to change anything but since you asked for a critique... The only critique I really have for it is about the hop cones. They look a little out of place to me but I like the idea of having them somewhere in the label, maybe inside the triangle? I don't know, I'm not an expert graphic artist or anything.
well inside the triangle

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I do not like the location of hops


well inside the triangle

I think it might work somewhere in the triangle, it would be great to incorporate hops somewhere inside the brewery logo. However I'm not really feeling the location or the angle they're set on inside the triangle. Maybe I'll play with it a little more when I get some time. I've already printed off the labels using the second rendition, I like the way it's looking, can't wait to see what they look like on a bottle, bottling day on Sunday!
 
I do not like the location of hops


well inside the triangle

You could lower the opacity of the hop, make it larger, and put it behind your "Gold Dust IPA" text (and all future beer styles). You've got a lot of individual elements placed around, which can be very difficult to combine into a cohesive design (at least 5 different fonts, logo, name, descriptive text, hops, etc...). I think you've done a good job of it, and maybe the hop needs to be a little less obtrusive and fade into the background a bit.
 
Ive been wanting to come up with a simplistic label template. Took my inspiration from wine bottle formats. Both me and my daughter are aries so I figured this would go good. Not sure which one I like better though, Let me know what you think.

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Ive been wanting to come up with a simplistic label template. Took my inspiration from wine bottle formats. Both me and my daughter are aries so I figured this would go good. Not sure which one I like better though, Let me know what you think.

I vote for the tan label.
 
Ive been wanting to come up with a simplistic label template. Took my inspiration from wine bottle formats. Both me and my daughter are aries so I figured this would go good. Not sure which one I like better though, Let me know what you think.

Tan!!!

Might steal this concept
 
Ive been wanting to come up with a simplistic label template. Took my inspiration from wine bottle formats. Both me and my daughter are aries so I figured this would go good. Not sure which one I like better though, Let me know what you think.

I like the tan one better.

I realize you didn't ask for this, and I am in no way trying to offend you or say I don't like your label, but I made a digitized version of your drawing. If you don't like it no worries but it was easy for me to do. I hope I didn't step on your toes.

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