Shot a 30 sec commercial for the store need some feedback

[uncleben113]

Very good. Looks like a really nice store

 

[pavyaz19]

Good job, I like it! There's only so much you can do with a local spot and you nailed it!

 

[tonyc318]

Nice work man! Wish that store was in my town!

 

[Sacdan]

Looks great!

 

[strambo]

Very nice, it showcases how open, clean and organized the store is also which will put beginners at ease.

 

[Bobby_M]

Good luck with the store, it looks awesome. I'm jealous cuz I'm too chicken sh!t to take the leap and quit my day job to do the same.

 

[snpr13]

I have to agree with all as well. Looks like a fantastic store. Very profesional and clean. Most homebrew shops are very basic and warehouse like. Yours looks like a clean and boutique shop. Very well done. Congrats and good luck. When I come to Cali I hope to visit the shop.

 

[Wreck99]

Looks great!

 

[biochemedic]

I'm just thoroughly impressed that a LHBS is actually advertising on television!

 

[Jaybird]

I have to agree with all as well. Looks like a fantastic store. Very profesional and clean. Most homebrew shops are very basic and warehouse like. Yours looks like a clean and boutique shop. Very well done. Congrats and good luck. When I come to Cali I hope to visit the shop.

I am very lucky...My business partner and his SWMBO used to own a decor store and has mad talent when it comes to boutique shop stuff. Yeah she kills it for sure..

Thanks for all the input you guys! It has sealed the deal for me, its going to go on air next week. I was really impressed with the TV stations local production crew. They had great ideas and was also willing to listen to ours and bring it to life for us. This was a total blast to do. They filmed for about2-2.5 hours for a 30sec spot. But we own it now and can play it anywhere and anytime as long as we can afford the air time.
Cheers
Jay

 

[IrregularPulse]

The things that grabbed me the whole time, was that you have a very nice, clean, stocked store. I think that says it all. Nice commercial. Only nitpick would be that you didn't mention, or I don't remember you mentioning, the experience of the staff and their ability to help and answer brewing questions.

 

[LarsonLE]

Great commercial! As everyone else has said, I would definitely shop in your store.

 

[Lamp24]

Good job best of luck on the grand opening!

 

[Jaybird]

So it looks like I am going to have 95 spots on air over the next 3 weeks! 4 local stations to all the outside areas for about 100 miles.....Ohh I hope this helps get people to the May 5th Grand Opening and the AHA Big Brew Day.... We just got our tasting license so there is going to be (legal) beer and wine tasting in the store all day! Woo Hooo!

Thanks for all the support and feed back you guys!
Cheers
Jay

 

[PuckeredPenguin]

It's Good Run It!!!! :rockin:

 

[Homercidal]

Looks great!

 

[deezy]

Looks great; nice job!

 

[mattnuke]

Very nice wish I lived closer.

 

[arg]

I'd shop there.

 

[MaltMonster]

The things that grabbed me the whole time, was that you have a very nice, clean, stocked store. I think that says it all. Nice commercial. Only nitpick would be that you didn't mention, or I don't remember you mentioning, the experience of the staff and their ability to help and answer brewing questions.

"At Nor*Cal Brewing Solutions you'll find all the equipments, supplies and expert advice."

Great job! As stated so much better than most local commercials and the store looks great as well.

 

[wedge421]

Really well done man

 

[Harvbar]

great job, very well made. I would stop by for the opening if i wasn't 2,800 miles away

 

[obsidian]

Nice opening to the commercial. I would tone down the background music bit. Other that that good pans thru the descriptions of the products and what is available. It was a enough to say I need to visit to see more.
Good Job.

 

[HexKrak]

I know you picked the font because of your logo, but I thought it was a bit much using it for the majority of your text.

Aside from that, the audio and video quality was great, and everyone was well composed and fairly natural, unlike a lot of store owners/employees that are awkward in front of the camera.

 

[Jaybird]

Thanks for all the tips guys!
I cant wait to see it on TV.

 

[Ultrazord]

Not going to skim the comments on this one, but....

Pretty good all around. Bigger phone numbers, not sure if they just looked small on the PC or if they are small.

Also, Do the actual # underneath. I'd also include area codes.
So 221 - Brew becomes (###) ### - ####

Cell phones don't always have the letters so it can be hard to call sometimes. Also, sometimes in a hotel or w/e might see and need the area code.