First Crack at a Label... Opinions Please...

HOP-HEAD · Feb 28, 2009

My first crack at a label... any and all opinions appreciated:

spitfire · Feb 28, 2009

That's awesome. Great label

Memorex88 · Feb 28, 2009

I really like it! I'd like to see the 7.9% down next to the 12 fl.

Thwizzit · Feb 28, 2009

If you don't mind my opinions, I think you should accent the main feature which is the Fat Ass by 1) making the text fat and B) increasing the size of the ass. I don't think you even need to see the donkey's face because it's irrelevant, just show a hint of the back of his head and ears.

I also darkened the sides a little to act as a frame because all the elements were on the same color background. Lastly, I added a circle behind the donkey to try and tie the central elements together a little and focus your attention. Oh, and I'm not sure if you drew this or if it's clip art but the donkey only has three legs... Three Legged Fat Ass Brew???

HOP-HEAD · Feb 28, 2009

That's friggin' amazing... I don't even want to ask how you took that, changed it that way, and put it back up here so quickly... my first attempt took me forever. Awesome ideas.

HOP-HEAD · Feb 28, 2009

Combination of the original and a few of the ideas tossed out here... still need to adjust the colors to highlight the center, and maybe go with a little bit more baloon-ish lettering, but already it's improved greatly.