first beer label

[evilnoah]

hahaha was messing around for my first beer label (i am a bowhunter btw)

 

[Orfy]

Looking good.
What's the beer?

 

[evilnoah]

I guess it would be a good idea to say the type of beer. Brown Ale

 

[IrregularPulse]

Probably be a good idea to mention the type of beer on the label. And though not necessary, I like putting abv% on my labels and tap handle labels so people are aware if they can drink 2 or 12.

"Better than a steaming pile o' guts"! haha Setting the bar awfully high aren't we?

 

[0202]

Hey that looks nice!

Did you do the entire thing from scratch?

I really like how you integrated the ribbon with the label border, making it
stick out from behind on the outside.

I'd move the RBC up a bit to give the buck breathing room, and put a thin
black outline around the edges of the ribbon to make it pop more.

 

[evilnoah]

yes I did the whole thing from scratch on photoshop (my other hobby). Thanks for the input and ideas on the design I may give them a try!

 

[Memorex88]

I'd move the RBC up a bit to give the buck breathing room

+1

looks good, nice job!

 

[MoRoToRiUm]

Make the ribbon a new layer, add drop shadow; I'd almost make the buck bigger and have it on top of the RBC; different background color or color for buck so it stands out; capitalize B in Better, maybe add quotations?

I'ts MUCH easier to critique someone's label then your own; just listing things I would try out