Bronck's Brewery - Label Design

[JonasBronck]

My first shot at the label. Let me know what you think or what you would change?

 

[Pappers_]

Very nice!

 

[nakeddog]

I think it looks great. If I was going to be super anal, the only thing I would mention is the lettering on the ribbon. I would try to get it to follow the flow of the ribbon a bit better. But really, that is a stretch. It really looks great.

 

[IPAAAA]

I would try to center the bird...otherwise it looks very nice.

 

[JonasBronck]

Update Possibly final label

 

[Yunko]

Love it.

2nd label looks much more refined.

 

[BargainMugs]

love it.

2nd label looks much more refined.

+1

 

[IPAAAA]

Bird not being centered still makes it look funky...imo.

 

[Josh]

I don't think it's the bird...can you rotate the bundle of grain counter-clockwise a bit? I think it's hooking in and creating the appearance of the bird being too close.

I'd also make the lettering on the banner/ribbon a little smaller - that way it'll feel less forced.

those two (small) points aside, this is a nice looking label!

Bird not being centered still makes it look funky...imo.

 

[jbrookeiv]

Also, shouldn't there be an apostrophe in Bronck's?

 

[JonasBronck]

Updated Front and Back beer label for The Bronck's Brewery.

 

[stinkypants]

Suggest taking out the second "(then known as New Amsterdam)"

I like the picture; will these both fit on a bottle?

 

[JonasBronck]

It will fit. I am using 4x3 wine labels on Belgian bottles. the front fits nicely at 4x3 and the back label 3x4 it looks great! I have spent 2 months working on label and finally have brew in the bottles carbing up. I cant wait!