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Old 02-07-2008, 03:50 PM   #1
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Big Ring Brewing- American Strong Ale

Dedicated to the strong men who race through hell each spring.
7.2% abv. Warning to drink this beer and attempt to race.
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Old 02-07-2008, 06:19 PM   #2
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I like it. I have a brainstorm for you. How about a B/W or Sepia conversion, and an oval crop?
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Old 02-07-2008, 07:34 PM   #3
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There is too much focus on the spectators on the right.
I know these are crap but ideas on direction maybe.
More focus on the rider.




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Old 02-12-2008, 03:31 PM   #4
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I agree with you, Orfy, bring the focus to the biker. Here's two other takes on that idea. I like the second of these better, m'self:



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