Here's my input:
My last brew was an american ale. The wort was chilled from boiling to about 80 degrees F in about an hour. The yeast was pitched at about 80 degrees.
While an hour isn't terrible for a cold break, I'd like to see 20 minutes or less. Agreed with the others, 80 degrees is too warm for the yeast to be pitched into. You want the temp around 65-70 degrees. High temps will stress it out and create off flavors.
The recipe was something my local home brew store pulled off the internet. The recipe came from the BYO website, Blueberry Brown Ale. I substituted peaches for blueberries during the second fermentation; it is an all extract recipe. The brew was in the primary fermenter for one week and in the second for a week as well; they were at room temperature of 77 degrees F. I used 4 oz of dextrose for priming. It fermented very well in the first fermentor, very tall krausen, not much action in the secondary.
Well, primary fermentation should be complete before racking to a secondary and to me 1 week isn't enough time in primary. Check the gravity of the wort to be sure it's done (3 days at the same level = done), as the krausen falling and no bubbling are not indicators of complete fermentation. Only the gravity will confirm that. You shouldn't expect to see any activity in the secondary - secondaries are used for clearing the beer or aging it. There should be no visible activity. Are you filling the secondary to the top or is there head space? Head space in secondary can/will cause oxidation which will cause more off flavors.
They have come out with little carbonation, cloudy, a slight syrupy consistency, and off flavors.
The fruit that you add to secondary - is it real fruit or extract? If it's extract then the yeast may have stalled and not converted all the sugars which could give you the syrup-ish taste. Also, if the yeast in primary was too stressed out (high temps) or not enough yeast was pitched (would also stress it way out) and didn't finish converting those sugars, same deal.
Is it possible that the yeast did what it was suppose to do in the first fermentation and then died off during the secondary? I do have some carbonation in the bottle, just not as much as I should.
If enough yeast was pitched, there should still be plenty even after a secondary to carb the bottles. I would make sure you pitched enough yeast using mrmalty.com.
One other thing that comes to mind, I used city supplied tap water which contains chlorine and fluoride; could that have anything to do with it? Some of the better brews I did in the beginning I used Ozarka spring water or water from my Mom's private well.
You do not want fluoride and chlorine in your water, again this will cause off flavors. Use bottled spring water from the store unless you can find a good, clean source. Since this is extract brewing, did the water that was added into primary come from a bottled source? If not, it needs to be boiled as city water will still have micro-organisms in it and can cause off flavors.
I hope this helps, let me know if you have questions!
Happy Brewing!