Read a few recipes for double recipes and byo's style guide and updated one more time I think its a lot closer now....I reduced all the malt and added some corn sugar
this is it! fine looking recipe - i think it's gonna be REALLY good
my only 2 cents - 1 package of S-05 is not enough. I'd up that to 2 packages. I'd also move that 30min addition to flame out - you've got some really good layering of hops going on in your scheme, it just looks incomplete with no hops at the very end