An Extract bitter Recipe...

[punkrawkgeek]

I am trying to come up with a recipe for my dad, that loves bitters... and I thought I would ask you guys before I went head over heels on something that is going to taste like poop. This is what I have come up with...

SP - Extract BI Bitter - Extra Special/Strong Bitter (English Pale Ale)
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Batch Size: 6 Gallon
Boil Time: 60 Mins
Efficiency: 70%
OG: 1.046
FG: 1.009
ABV: 4.8%
Bitterness: 24.4 IBUs (Tinseth)
Color: 9 SRM (Morey)

Fermentables
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Name Type Amount Mashed Late Yield Color
Carastan Grain 3.000 oz No No 73% 37 L
Caramel/Crystal Malt - 30L Grain 5.000 oz No No 75% 30 L
Liquid Extract (LME) - Pale Extract 7.500 lb No No 78% 8 L

Total grain: 8.000 lb

Hops
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Name Alpha Amount Use Time Form IBU
Cascade 6.0% 1.000 oz Boil 60.000 min Leaf 24.4
Golding 5.0% 1.000 oz Boil 0.000 s Leaf 0.0

Yeast
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Name Type Form Amount Stage
Danstar - Nottingham Ale Dry 2.232 tsp Primary


Any feedback would be awesome. Thank you!