Gun Smoke Lager

[TREMBLE]

Hi guys, just looking for some feedback on a new label, I need to make 2 new lager labels and a stout and have left it till everything is almost ready to drink!
This is my first new lager one, not sure I am as happy with it as I was with my last one, please tell me if you can think of any improvements!

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/Tremble111/Labels/GunSmoke4.jpg

Thanks guys!

 

[TheJadedDog]

I like it.

 

[homebrewer_99]

Me, too!

 

[EvilTOJ]

All I see is a buxom lass with a smoking gun. I like it

 

[HomerT]

Nice. WOuld be better for a smoke beer.

 

[loopmd]

I like it, but how 'bout putting a red line under "red line brewing" instead of a blue one?

loop