Bronck's Brewery - Label Design

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nakeddog

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I think it looks great. If I was going to be super anal, the only thing I would mention is the lettering on the ribbon. I would try to get it to follow the flow of the ribbon a bit better. But really, that is a stretch. It really looks great.
 

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I would try to center the bird...otherwise it looks very nice.
 

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Bird not being centered still makes it look funky...imo.
 

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I don't think it's the bird...can you rotate the bundle of grain counter-clockwise a bit? I think it's hooking in and creating the appearance of the bird being too close.

I'd also make the lettering on the banner/ribbon a little smaller - that way it'll feel less forced.

those two (small) points aside, this is a nice looking label! :mug:

Bird not being centered still makes it look funky...imo.
 

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Suggest taking out the second "(then known as New Amsterdam)"

I like the picture; will these both fit on a bottle?
 
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It will fit. I am using 4x3 wine labels on Belgian bottles. the front fits nicely at 4x3 and the back label 3x4 it looks great! I have spent 2 months working on label and finally have brew in the bottles carbing up. I cant wait!
 
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