Looks good, I'm no recipe expert and certainly not astute enough to clone beers, but it looks pretty Scottish and that has to be good. Personally I get very little Scots anything from 90/- if you mean O'Dell's. It is a nice beer, just not what I see as Scottish. I'd rather drink yours. I think O'Dells must have some biscuit or victory maybe to give it a bready aroma.