Recipe OK. Yeasts can be delicate and be shocked by too warm or too cold temperature. Temp. should be in the 65-75 deg. range. If you waited 24 hours after Campden tablets added - should be fine. Bucket covered w/ airlock. Good point made above about the juice - check the ingredients.
Having made many kits over the years..obey the instructions with your kit. CLEAN & SANITIZE. I am assuming the kit also came with other chemical packets: fining agent(s), stabilizer & preservatives. Are you sure the kit says to add cold water - if you make it up with cold tap water the...