New Label. (input please)

Hello. This is my first label for my first homebrew. I used photoshop and a quote from one of the users that i saw on the forums... lemme know what u think. Thanks to MVKTR2 for the idea.

 

I'd suggest making the 'Patriot Ale' font a lot larger, and maybe lighten the gray - the ball player kind of fades into the background. Good start, though!

 

thanks. appreciate it

 

The flags behind the Patriot are distracting....I think I would get rid of them.

 

Maybe instead of a bunch of flags, one flag in the background flying high would be nice.

+1 on reducing the opacity of the background.

Good job! I like the quote at the bottom!

 

I would also make the area "inside" the player just the background color without the flags. Other than lightening up the bg, it looks nice.

 

+1 on getting rid of the flags I would think one large flag would look much nicer and keep it out of the side bars.

 

thanks. i'll look into this after work later. thanks again

 

My two cents is that I feel it lacks cohesiveness. It looks like a lot separate elements instead of a unified design. Even the words Patriot and Ale don't look like they are together. I don't think the flags necessarily need to go but maybe they need to be rethought or muted down a bit or maybe instead of lots of little flags maybe a large waving flag as a back drop. I don't know exactly but I feel like it needs to be brought together in some way.

 

I think "teach a man to brew" instead of "teach a man to make beer" sounds better. The "make beer" part makes it a bit too wordy IMHO.

 

thank you all for the input. i will consider this and make modifications where necessary. thanks.

 

Here's a quick thought

 

I would take the "Patriot" off and insert "Packer". Then take of the football player and insert another football player. Then I would take THAT football player off and change it to another one. Then maybe take the "Packer" off and change it to "Buccaneer" .

No - maybe I would just leave it the way it is!

 

Another similar quote is "Give a man a Brew, He'll waste a Day. Teach a man to brew, he'll waste a lifetime."

 

haha! those were all good idea's thanks.. and that new label looks nice too.. thanks