For Dr Deewee:
I would shrink the size of the beer name, and think
about including some more information like what type
of beer it is, etc. (In smaller letters or another type
It's nice to see an illustration though, I bet that'll look
nice printed out on a bottle
The Hulk one is a better layout. I like that one best
(in terms of layout). But really a hand drawn illustration
is awesome for logo work like this.
IF you can draw, by all means draw your logo!!!
You can even consider drawing the text.
Kill your television