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Old 12-03-2008, 06:30 PM   #1
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Default Christmas Ale Label - First Draft.

I'm looking for comments on my first draft...

1) The two fonts; too reader hostile?
2) The tan and green inset: too garish with red?



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Old 12-03-2008, 06:40 PM   #2
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i would lighten the opacity on the green inset to bring the image forward. Maybe use a white glow around the image .

also consider chaning the snow cap font. It doesn't bother me but seems a little too cheesy.

The v-clip at the bottom of santa's suit reads kind of funny too. Maybe square it off and fade it down. Consider reducing the size of the santa image too. That might give it more of a 'home' inside the tan/green inset.

That's all minor stuff though. Looks sharp. Definitely on the way.
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