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Old 10-29-2008, 08:03 PM   #1
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Go easy on me, I have MS Paint to work with today at work.



I like to keep things simple.


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Old 10-29-2008, 09:10 PM   #2
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Looks good. I think you chose the correct fonts. It would be improved if you removed the white box from behind the brewery name. If you need something for readability just put a drop shadow back there.

What's the inspiration for using that imagery?

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Old 10-29-2008, 09:50 PM   #3
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Looks good. I think you chose the correct fonts. It would be improved if you removed the white box from behind the brewery name. If you need something for readability just put a drop shadow back there.

What's the inspiration for using that imagery?

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I did another one but I deleted it for some reason. I have it in my email box at home though so I will repost it. It looks much better with the brewery name changed.

The imagery was inspired by a band that my brother and I have taken a liking to. We listened to that CD while remodeling the basement and main floor of the house we bought. And its only fitting that I put the imagery on the beer brewed in the house where that CD helped with the renovation.
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I agree I would remove the white background and combine both lines of text into something else or use a different background.
I also like the brown color on the label it will definitely look good on the bottle.
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Old 10-31-2008, 01:26 AM   #5
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This one is way better. What do you guys think?
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Increase the font size a bit, and you are there... nice aged look!
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Increase the font size a bit, and you are there... nice aged look!
I would have to agree,

Other than that, it looks very good......................
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I think I will do that, thanks guys!


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